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This issue opens a short time after the preceding issue -- therefore everybody will wear the same clothes, etc. HARRY has been taken over by JEROME's personality between issues, as the text will hopefully make clear.
Narration in this issue is provided by JEROME and captions will be marked JEROME's JOURNAL in the text.
Some people in this issue will be speaking Japanese. Their captions should be lettered in Japanese with an English translation provided immediately underneath. Accuracy of the Japanese text in this script is not guaranteed.
JEROME faces POWL THE SAMURAI in a full-page action panel. POWL looks as described when introduced on PAGE 18 OF LAST ISSUE. POWL holds two Japanese swords -- katanas, one in each hand. He is swinging one of the swords at JEROME, who is unarmed. We don't need to show any background or context for this scene -- the two fighting figures are all that matter. JEROME is dressed exactly as HARRY was in the last issue, minus the overcoat.
CAPTION (JEROME's JOURNAL):
CAPTION (JEROME's JOURNAL):
CAPTION (JEROME's JOURNAL):
JEROME, twisting, steps back and out of the way of the sweeping sword.
CAPTION (JEROME's JOURNAL):
CAPTION (JEROME's JOURNAL):
CAPTION (JEROME's JOURNAL):
He ducks as POWL's second sword sweeps over his head.
CAPTION (JEROME's JOURNAL):
CAPTION (JEROME's JOURNAL):
CAPTION (JEROME's JOURNAL):
Finally, he's too slow to avoid another cut. The sword rakes across his stomach, cutting cloth and spilling blood. (It's not obvious how bad the cut is -- not deep, but we want lots of blood.)
CAPTION (JEROME's JOURNAL):
JEROME:
The interior of a big meat freezer, as seen at the end of last issue. JAMES, SARA, FRED, CHI-YUN, and JEROME are all present. Note that JAMES does not have his SHIELD. Mist comes from everybody's mouth (except CHI-YUN's), to indicate that it really is freezing in here. This can be the dominant panel on the page, to set the scene and fit a fair bit of dialogue in. This is a flashback to shortly before the preceding action, by the way, so JEROME is uninjured and still wears the overcoat HARRY wore last issue.
CAPTION (JEROME's JOURNAL):
CAPTION (JEROME's JOURNAL):
CHI-YUN:
SARA:
JAMES:
FRED:
CAPTION (JEROME's JOURNAL):
JEROME has taken off his overcoat and drops it over SARA's shoulders.
JEROME:
SARA:
JEROME looks pointedly at FRED, who zips up his leather jacket defiantly.
JEROME:
FRED:
Close up on CHI-YUN, who is examining the door.
CHI-YUN:
CAPTION (JEROME's JOURNAL):
Another shift of scene. It's a stretch of beach at night during a violent storm. Rain lashes down and the sea crashes and foams. Two men drag themselves out of the water and onto the beach. Actually, one man does the dragging -- the other is unconscious, maybe dead. The one still moving is, of course, JEROME. His hair is longer than we are used to but he otherwise looks much the same. (Realistically, he wouldn't look identical to his "current" body, but we need to portray him so that the readers will recognise him.) Their clothing is ragged and sodden and should look archaic, from about 300 years ago.
CAPTION (JEROME's JOURNAL):
CAPTION:
CAPTION:
JEROME is on his knees in the sand with the surf behind him. His companion lies face down, not moving. In front of JEROME is a party of armed Japanese samurai. Their leader stands over JEROME and glowers down at him. This is MIYAMOTO -- he's a stern, stiff-looking elderly JAPANESE man, formally dressed (though slightly sodden now). Though his face is lined and there is grey in his hair, his bearing suggests that he is more than capable of using the katana he wears.
MIYAMOTO:
TRANSLATION:
JEROME:
JEROME collapses in the sand while MIYAMOTO continues to stand immobile and stare down at him.
No dialogue.
Same scene. JEROME lies still and MIYAMOTO regards him coldly.
MIYAMOTO:
The interior of a traditional Japanese home. Daylight. The room is virtually bare of furnishings. JEROME lies on a mattress on the floor, covered by a silk sheet. His eyes are open. (He's naked under the sheet, though we can't be certain of that in this panel.) MIYAMOTO stands next to the bed, watching JEROME. Behind MIYAMOTO, two JAPANESE women kneel with their heads down. All the Japanese wear traditional dress, of course. MIYAMOTO is armed.
MIYAMOTO:
TRANSLATION:
JEROME:
JEROME:
TRANSLATION:
JEROME:
TRANSLATION:
Close up on MIYAMOTO's face, which looks as though he's smelt something bad.
MIYAMOTO:
JEROME:
MIYAMOTO:
MIYAMOTO:
JEROME lunges to his feet.
JEROME:
MIYAMOTO now has JEROME's wrist twisted in some kind of painful-looking hold. Despite JEROME's bigger size and well-muscled torso, he looks helpless. His free hand is trying (and failing) to grab MIYAMOTO. Yes, that does mean the sheet has fallen away, but the panel border conveniently preserves his modesty.
JEROME:
MIYAMOTO:
Close up on JEROME's face, twisted with pain.
MIYAMOTO (off-panel):
MIYAMOTO (off-panel):
JEROME:
Back in the freezer, everybody stands around freezing (hugging themselves, rubbing their arms, etc -- except CHI-YUN).
SARA:
JAMES:
SARA:
JAMES:
JAMES is now examining the door. FRED and CHI-YUN look on.
JAMES:
FRED:
CHI-YUN:
FRED:
JEROME sits cross-legged on the floor. Behind him, FRED and CHI-YUN are still bickering.
CHI-YUN:
FRED:
SARA squats next to JEROME.
SARA:
JEROME:
SARA:
This is another flashback, so another complete change of scene. Daylight, outdoors, a garden somewhere in Japan. A man -- MIYAMOTO from the last flashback -- sits on the ground in front of a small tree. His sword is across his lap. His back is to our POV. JEROME, dressed in "Western" clothes (informal clothing appropriate to a 17th century European), strides across the garden towards him. Note that JEROME is unarmed.
JEROME:
JEROME stands next to MIYAMOTO and looks down at him. MIYAMOTO continues to regard the tree.
JEROME:
JEROME:
MIYAMOTO:
JEROME is now sitting next to MIYAMOTO, looking at him. MIYAMOTO doesn't takes his eyes off the tree.
JEROME:
MIYAMOTO:
They both sit and look at the tree.
No dialogue.
They both sit and look at the tree.
No dialogue.
JEROME turns to MIYAMOTO
JEROME:
MIYAMOTO:
JEROME strides away, towards our POV, his face angry. Behind him, MIYAMOTO watches the tree grow.
No dialogue.
Back to "now": SARA and JEROME.
JEROME:
SARA:
SARA wanders over to where CHI-YUN, JAMES, and FRED are standing by the door. She's blowing on her fingers.
SARA:
CHI-YUN:
JAMES:
CHI-YUN:
FRED places his hands flat against the wall next to the door.
FRED:
The other three look at him.
CHI-YUN:
CHI-YUN (softly):
JAMES:
SARA:
Close up on FRED's face.
FRED:
And an even closer view of just his eyes -- with a man reflected in them.
FRED:
Wider view, again showing the others watching FRED concentrate on his task.
CHI-YUN:
SARA:
Outside, a man stands alone outside the door to the cold room. He's armed with a small SMG (most likely an Ingram, MAC-11) and is lounging against the wall, not very alert. Of course, it's the man reflected in FRED's eyes.
No dialogue.
Suddenly the man is alert, upright, eyes wide open.
No dialogue.
The guard goes to the freezer door and begins pulling back the bolts.
SFX (bolt):
The door begins to swing open --
No dialogue.
--And FRED's fist comes through the ajar door and punches the guard on the chin.
SFX:
Now they are all outside in the empty guard room. JAMES is lowering the unconscious guard to the floor.
JAMES:
Close up on FRED, who is squeezing his temples.
FRED:
JAMES stands next to a door which is slightly ajar and looks through it. The others crowd behind.
JAMES:
FRED:
JAMES:
FRED:
JAMES has stepped away from the door and confronts FRED, slightly irked.
JAMES:
FRED:
While this is going on, JEROME slips through the door.
CAPTION (JEROME's JOURNAL):
CAPTION (JEROME's JOURNAL):
Back in the room, FRED and JAMES are still facing off. SARA and CHI-YUN look at the door.
CHI-YUN:
SARA:
JEROME is elsewhere in the building. He's at the end of a long corridor, facing a door. His hand is reaching for the door handle --
No dialogue.
-- when it suddenly opens. JEROME (still standing with his hand outstretched) now faces another guard, dressed similarly to the last one and carrying a similar weapon.
No dialogue.
JEROME has the man in some kind of clever joint lock -- the hand which holds his gun is twisted round, arm straight out, and the man is bent double.
GUARD:
Still locking the arm, JEROME kicks the guard in the face.
SFX:
Big panel, showing the room that JEROME is now looking into. There are five other men in here. It looks like the rent-a-thug social club. Three are sitting at a table playing cards, one is on a couch in front of a TV, one is pouring himself coffee. All have guns nearby. And all are looking at JEROME. Who stands in the doorway, the unconscious guard at his feet. (Note that there is a second exit from the room but it is not necessary to show it in this panel.)
VOICE FROM TV:
Close up on JEROME, looking remarkably calm.
JEROME:
Close up on one of the thugs, reaching for his gun.
THUG:
A scene cut to a different room -- a small, empty room with JAMES's SHIELD in plain view on a bench. Plus a stack of phones (because you wouldn't lock someone up and let them keep their phones, would you?). The door to this room is closed.
VOICE (though door):
The door opens and SARA's head pokes in.
SARA:
JAMES, SARA, FRED, and CHI-YUN are in the room. JAMES slides his left forearm through the straps of his shield. SARA and FRED pick up phones.
JAMES:
SFX:
SFX:
SFX:
SFX:
SFX:
They all look at each other.
SARA:
JAMES:
They are charging down a corridor, probably JAMES and SARA in the lead, FRED and CHI-YUN bringing up the rear.
No dialogue.
Back in the "guard room", JEROME now stands alone. The card table is smashed, the TV is smoking on the floor, and all the guards are lying around in various painful poses, obviously unconscious.
CAPTION (JEROME's JOURNAL):
JEROME has opened another door and is standing in the doorway, looking into another much larger room (a warehouse space or something). We'll show this from a POV over his shoulder, so we can see what he sees: another group of guards (about eight, or as many as the panel can comfortably show), all armed and all pointing weapons at him. In the centre of the group is POWL THE SAMURAI, exactly as we saw him on the opening pages. His twin swords are sheathed at his side. Make this a pretty big panel so POWL looks imposing.
POWL:
POWL:
Close up on JEROME.
JEROME:
A close-up on POWL. His face is impassive.
POWL:
Close on JEROME, equally impassive.
JEROME:
Now a profile view of the two of them, face-to-face (this is probably a "false" perspective, to show both of them on the same panel when they are actually several yards apart).
POWL:
JEROME:
POWL:
JEROME:
POWL:
JEROME:
A wide view of the room again, showing JEROME vastly outnumbered by POWL's armed men.
JEROME:
Full-on view of POWL (showing some of his men behind him). He is drawing his swords.
SFX (swords):
POWL:
Now we go back to PAGE 2 PANEL 3, with POWL cutting JEROME. In fact, this should be an identical panel (though smaller). The sword rakes across JEROME's stomach, cutting cloth and spilling blood.
JEROME:
A sudden cut to an idyllic outdoor scene in Japan. JEROME and MIYAMOTO walk side by side, in conversation. They are alone. They should be approaching some trees or bushes or something from which an ambush could be sprung. MIYAMOTO is armed, naturally. JEROME wears a Japanese kimono but is unarmed.
No dialogue
Now, suddenly, JEROME and MIYAMOTO are surrounded by three Japanese men, all with drawn swords. And ahead of them stands a European. He's big, muscular, bearded, and dressed in European clothing (of the period). A pistol is stuck through his waistband. This is ALLDAY.
JEROME:
ALLDAY:
JEROME is now standing face-to face with ALLDAY and they are gripping each other's hands and grinning. In the background, MIYAMOTO is still surrounded by the three armed men.
ALLDAY:
JEROME:
ALLDAY:
JEROME has now backed off a step and looks worried. ALLDAY, grim now, gestures at MIYAMOTO.
JEROME:
ALLDAY:
JEROME:
ALLDAY levels his pistol at MIYAMOTO. MIYAMOTO is several yards away, and surrounded by drawn swords of course, so there's no way he's going to save himself. His demeanour, however, is unperturbed. JEROME, on the other hand, looks shocked.
ALLDAY:
ALLDAY:
JEROME has thrown himself at ALLDAY and grabbed his gun arm. (This panel is a close-up of the two of them, we can't see what the Japanese are doing.)
JEROME:
ALLDAY:
Now a very close-up of them while they wrestle. The gun is between their bodies.
JEROME:
ALLDAY:
They are still grappling when the gun goes off -- but it's still between their bodies so we can't see who has been shot!
SFX:
ALLDAY:
ALLDAY falls to the floor (still holding the smoking gun) as JEROME watches impassively. We still can't see the Japanese but there are sound-effects from their direction.
SFX (off-panel):
SFX (off-panel):
SFX (off-panel):
SFX (off-panel):
SFX (off-panel):
SFX (off-panel):
JEROME turns to MIYAMOTO. We can now see that MIYAMOTO stands alone, bloody sword in his hand, with three bodies at his feet.
MIYAMOTO:
JEROME:
MIYAMOTO bows to JEROME.
MIYAMOTO:
Close-up on JEROME's face.
JEROME:
Back to the present, as we can tell from JEROME's clothes. He's still facing POWL. The front of his shirt is red with blood. POWL has his sword held high, bringing it down to slice JEROME in two.
No dialogue
Close-up on JEROME's head and shoulders as the sword comes down. He has clapped his hands together, one on each side of the blade, halting its downward stroke!
No dialogue
JEROME has twisted his body and pulled the sword out of POWL's grip.
No dialogue
JEROME and POWL face each other. Each now has one sword (JEROME has turned his so he's holding it by the handle instead of by the blade). POWL's eyes are wide with shock (or maybe fear?)
POWL:
JEROME:
Their blades clash once.
CAPTION (JEROME's JOURNAL):
Twice.
CAPTION (JEROME's JOURNAL):
Three times.
CAPTION (JEROME's JOURNAL):
And JEROME's sword slides deep into POWL's body.
CAPTION (JEROME's JOURNAL):
POWL lies on the floor. JEROME, covered in blood but still holding his (blood-stained) sword confronts the armed men. (We shouldn't be able to see the door behind him at the moment.)
JEROME:
SARA (off-panel):
The armed men look at one another...
No dialogue
...And turn and run from the room.
No dialogue
JEROME has sunk to his knees. Still gripping the sword. SARA is on her knees next to him.
SARA:
JEROME:
JEROME:
A wider panel, showing that JAMES, FRED, and CHI-YUN have entered the room.
JAMES:
FRED:
CHI-YUN:
The group emerges from the factory, into dark streets. CHI-YUN is carrying JEROME in her arms. (She's wearing a white "nurse" uniform, complete with little cap.) In front of them, barring their path, stands a shadowy shape -- unmistakably KNIGHT OWL. He carries a small aluminium case.
FRED:
From KNIGHT OWL's POV we see JAMES and SARA move to stand protectively in front of CHI-YUN.
JAMES:
FRED:
KNIGHT OWL casually throws the case towards them.
KNIGHT OWL:
KNIGHT OWL:
As SARA catches the case, KNIGHT OWL rises on a blast of smoke and flame from his jet pack.
SARA:
SFX:
A final view of the our heroes' backs as they walk away from us.
SARA:
FRED:
CHI-YUN:
JAMES:
CHI-YUN:
JAMES:
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